song

By mysticventures

The air is alive with song

Tall grasses caressed by the wind

And the bees make love to the flowers

In the passion fields

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, July 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    fuck there's so much that passes thru my mind when reading your poetry.. you take me back to times primitive then light years away.. mysticventure indeed* 669 *

  • A former member wrote: yeah..i would agree with north on this one. its like a big, warm hug. and i want another, so ill read it again. nice work.

  • Northstar On Saturday, July 17, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    mmmm--this piece is like a warm hug --amazing that you can paint such a vivid picture in four lines!

  • mysticventures On Saturday, July 17, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    that was so sweet - thank you

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