??

By Crimson_Angel

How can you tell him he means everything to you when you cant talk to him?
How can you look into his eyes, when he smiles you turn away?
How can you say he doesnt care when you dont know?
How can you find out if he cares when you're scared of rejection?
How can you get him to care?
When you know he doesnt.

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Copyright 2004 Crimson_Angel
Published on Wednesday, July 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • HeadpatSlut On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Love sucks, doesn't it? Thanks for the write, I liked it. Short, sweet, and to the point. Write on! Scholar

  • Crimson_Angel On Friday, July 9, 2004, Crimson_Angel (8)By person wrote:

    you dont have to speak for everyone else! you dont know me so dont critisize me and get a life! ill write what i want!

  • A former member wrote: This is not poetry. A rant maybe, and a pointless one at that. Keep your posts meaningful enough so that the readers can atleast understand or feel something from what you write. +T.P.U+

  • Rebirth On Friday, July 9, 2004, Rebirth (72)By person wrote:

    If you don't like it don't comment. I'm sure that not everyone likes your work, but they keep it to themselves and don't put you down.

  • A former member wrote: It is called poetic license. Poetry need not have form nor even meaning. Example: The Jabberwocky. I'll do anything for an Alice reference.

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