Found My Peace
By WinterGrave
she said i was a sad person
as we sat alone under the night sky
a willow was over us
and the silver light was high
she sad i was not worth the time
as i sat in quite awe
as the moon played its game
reflecting on the lakeside we sat
i told her of my dreams
the life i wish to lead
as sounds of midnight
played there lament of fertility
she told me then
that i was pathetic and shallow
as bates flew above
crickets and frogs sang there song
she told me my life was pitiful
my ambitions hollow and weak
the night was breathtaking
the beauty unsurpassed
i told her every one has a dream, not all come true
she laughed at me then, her mask of contempt firmly in place
the beauty of this picture i was witness to
was rivaled by non that i have experience
as i sat and watched the sky
stars sparkled in my eyes
we sat in numb comfort
as my eyes sparkled in turn
i had no intentions
to do what i did
but her meaningless rambles
rang like bees in my head
as i marveled in this nights beauty
i could think of nothing more
to make this night more perfect
but seeing this girl next to me Dead
as i thought these thoughts
i glanced to the right
it seems as it was ment to be
a rock the size of my fist lay inches away
now as she droned on more
about my uncommon stupidity
i felt insanity grow
as a struck her in the head
she screamed her agony
witch i liked up like syrup
a pain i could see
as blood flowed free
twice more
a slugged her in on the head
three in the face
and i could tell she was dead
as i looked at the stares
as we sat in the sand
i found my peace
holding her dead hand.
Comments on "Found My Peace"
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A former member wrote:
This poem is amazingly beautiful, and at the same time you made me laugh my ass off.. Outstanding Lost
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A former member wrote:
morbid indeed, and insanely twisted. i love it. it captured me, i wasnt able to stop reading. i needed more. i love it!
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
wow I really loved the last few verses. very cool in a wicked way
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
gruesome and insane.. well written. Dark and twisted as well. -Michael
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
once i started, i couldnt stop reading! good job. A_C
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
Nice! this was beautifully expressed.. captivating!