the lock

By DarkNTormented

theres a lock your trying to break
a lock to my heart so you can take
my love my undivided attention
not to mention
the desire i've had for you for so long
while you were sitting there singing me that song

theres a lock your trying to break
into the door so you can take
a love sick heart to keep as yours
wanting it so bad your on all fours
begging to find the key
making it your one last plea

theres a lock your trying to break
in my life you wish to partake
tears rush from your eyes
like im some sort of special prize
loving and caring
even though it was daring

theres a lock your trying to break
i hope this doesnt end up to be a mistake
tears of blood from angels cries
everytime i hear the lies
many tears have been shed
and many more till we wed

theres a lock your trying to break
and your finding out its no peice of cake
although its quite easy
to aqquire the key
just prove to me
cant you see
all that needs to be done
is to show me your the one.

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Copyright 2004 DarkNTormented
Published on Tuesday, July 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anth On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    really great work again,the flow is faultless,the rhyming and repetition of the line excellent,keep it up, i always enjoy everyone one of your new writes,u always get better

  • whispers in the night On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, whispers in the night (11)By person wrote:

    "tears of blood from angels cries" loved that line.....

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