Unforgiven
By The Unforgiven Child
(I think I should specify, before I write this work, that my family died
in a fire when I was seven. This is why you'll see a lot of reference to
flames in my work. I was the only one of my mother, father, and little
brother, to survive.. therefore, I am the Unforgiven Child.)
Crying out, blanketed in smoke,
The child cannot run,
You've struck again, taken another,
mother, father, son.
Death it seems is everywhere,
or at least it's in my fate,
it shadows me with wicked grace,
it beckons me with hate.
Slowly, I am giving in,
I am crawling in my hole,
you've left me cold and empty,
you've destroyed my very soul.
So now I stand here screaming,
my mind is lost to rage,
my only wish, for you to come,
so that I can turn that page.
I am.. Unforgiven.
(At the end of this, I'd like to thank DarkNTormented for introducing me
to the site, where I'm confident enough to post my works, and know they'll
be accepted by my peers. Thanks, dollface. Looking forward to talking to
you more often.)
Comments on "Unforgiven"
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On Sunday, January 14, 2007, beautifulfallenangel
(62) wrote:
sometimes, the past is too hard to let go, and i'm sorry for the pain that you've been though, but you write beautifully, a token of fresh air to remind the whithering soul, there is life.......
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On Monday, May 29, 2006, weyvern
(80) wrote:
thats so amazing! im sorry for the pain that caused it but the beautie you have crafted from it...I look forward to future writes im glad you survived, your a sensation
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On Sunday, May 7, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
wow.. just wow.. tragic, and i'm very sorry.. and yet i am one of those many that can barely see past the pain
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
You have a lot of anger and pain and guilt. It bleeds from your work as does your passion to be dispassionate. You survived, do not waste a "miracle"
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A former member wrote:
wow...... heart touching.... I am sorry for you pain
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, DarkNTormented
(11) wrote:
awww....im speechless so i guess i cant say too much..lol..you are such a sweet guy...and your work is awesome!!! ~Amy~
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, Shewolf
(25) wrote:
Beautifuly written though I'm sorry for the source of your pain....~Shewolf~
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
welcome to dp. heartbreaking to know the source.. yet in this you've conveyed the anger frustration and loss perfectly... well done
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
im so sorry....and this...is just..unspeakably awesome...i've no words to put what i feel in..if that made sense... -Kel