Log In
My Stranger
By PointlessX
I don’t know you
and its obvious you don’t know me
if we don’t know each other
then what are we?
We must be strangers
you are definitely strange
I thought with enough time
you could change.
But you are still you
even though you say your not
I wanted to believe you
but you got caught.
And I got caught with you
caught up in your lies
our love once so strong
now only dies.
This whole time I thought I loved you
but I only loved who I thought you were
Now leave me alone
I don’t talk to strangers.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 PointlessX
Published on Monday, July 5, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "My Stranger"
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
Not bad, the last line was definitely cool. Also its easy to relate to so good job
-
A former member wrote:
his poem was beautiful, nice choice on how to end the poem. The last line really helps 'make' title, and that's often how I'll end my poems, usually just with the title.
-
On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
great write ~*~Tart~*~
-
On Monday, July 5, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I liked the ending very unique. Great all around poem very powerful. ~Kirsten~
-
A former member wrote:
oh my..heartachingly beautiful.. (i think i just made that word up)..i liked this a lot. especially the last line was a hitter. "Now leave me alone I don't talk to strangers"...that was awesome.
-
On Monday, July 5, 2004, DarkNTormented
(11) wrote:
WOW!! i love it you did a very good job writing this awesome...§ dark §
PointlessX's Latest Works Feed
Join