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Shattered
By Midnight Shadow
I look you in the eyes for the last time,
"Take my heart, I don't want it anymore"
With those words, I walk away,
Leaving you puzzled and alone.
You shattered it so many times,
It's finally unable to be repaired.
Lying in a broken heap in my soul,
You left it there when you were finished.
Jagged pieces of it lay everywhere,
Only to hurt someone I thought to love.
I don't like this broken feeling,
So I gave up the shards,
Which at one time were my heart.
Perhaps this is a decision I'll regret,
Trying to save the tattered edges of my soul.
I may now be heartless,
But my soul is still here.
I look at the empty space inside me,
And my eyes fill with tears...
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Copyright 2004 Midnight Shadow
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
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wrote:
torturous, sad.. a lot of pain.. I think a lot of people can relate to this one.. -Michael
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
exhale other people and their grip on your life... inhale you... fill yourself with youness... discover yourself without love, or friends...
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
not that love and friends aren't important... but they shouldn't destroy you, they should add to the glowing youness within. ::hug::
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A former member wrote:
Very well written... i'm impressed!
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
superb capture of that feeling.....ive been there too...i think most people have a little. truly well done.
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On Thursday, May 27, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
Hmmm...I know this feeling all too well unfortunately.Nice piece..very emotional..Butterfly..xxx...
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful piece, once again...the emotions are so vivid...wow.
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
^_^ Oh man, *hugz* This was well written (why aren't you published..yeah!) So much pain written in few words..
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
I know the exact feeling...ive gone through it lots...especially recently...people change and stuff... kya
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Why aren't you published??? I don't really think anything else needs to be said here. This is a good piece of work...~Mikey
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
yet another great write here... direct, honest...
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
wonderful ending, nice peice... Sue
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Beautifully spoken. I can see the images of a shattered heart lying on the ground lost and cold... So sad but awesome poem. ~Kirsten~
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
I may now be heartless, But my soul is still here. I look at the empty space inside me, And my eyes fill with tears... this was one of my fariot parts
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