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darkness
By so_skeevy
I close my eyes, and pretend that I can’t feel
My hurt, my pain, its all that still seems real.
I want to trust, I want to love
I wish so badly for comfort from above.
Then I remember that we all must stand alone
Maybe fear and darkness is where I am at home.
Please don’t tell me that everything’s okay
These lies can never take my misery away.
Its time to face my future, of sadness and despair
My hopelessness and I, we make a perfect pair
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Copyright 2004 so_skeevy
Published on Friday, April 23, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
All too perfect and fitting for those of us who feel like this. Some more than others, but still marvelous! =D
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Dysphoria
(88)
wrote:
We all know the feeling of hopelessness and deciet..excellent write -Justina
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A former member wrote:
Slicing hopelessness. You and your future are the bridal epitome of perfection in loss. -END-
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A former member wrote:
Cool, Rock on. I really liked the piece. Hits home for alot of what I feel inside.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue
(42) wrote:
hopelessness is better than hopefullness...hopes are so usually crushed mercilessly...great write...enjoyed it very much...
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Daegonna
(27) wrote:
Good Write! I can relate to this also... You got the feelings we all feel in it! EXCELLENT! ~Daegonna~
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On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
heh, I can relate to this also..-fairy-
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this poem. Here lately, I've felt the same way. Great poem. ºLucifielº
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