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You
By Alacer_Cogitatus
My soul aches,
My heart breaks,
As I remember the way,
I treated you.
You deserved so much more,
than I had given.
You were worth everything,
and I traded it for nothing.
You were the perfect one,
the one and only.
My laziness and stupidity,
checked my ego at the door.
I gave up on you,
but you stood by me still.
And now is the time,
That I will truly
appreciate
you.
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Copyright 2004 Alacer_Cogitatus
Published on Thursday, April 30, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, April 30, 2015, blue angel
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wrote:
Getting a second chance is rare. I like the honesty you admit to in this poem. Great inking. :)
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On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I like the way you tell about what you did wrong. Awesome write ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
lovely. short, sweet, and to the point.
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
The structure of this gives it a lighter touch than it actually has after reading, well done. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
super poem sweet but not to sweet
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