confused

By DarkNTormented

im so confused, lost within my own mind
the answers i seek i seem to not find
i want to choose,
but then one i will have to lose
is it worth it?
Will i still have the time?
Everyday im trapped in a dark hole
my heart has turned into nothing more than a peice of coal
the more i try to find myself the further i fall
im trying to hard, im walking before i crawl
my heart feels like its bleeding
i feel like im failing not succeeding

im so confused, lost within my own mind
for i will have to choose
but the anwers i seek can i find?
For i think this is it
damn i feel like shit
time to climb
to get back to my own state of mind
to crawl out of my hole
track down my soul
only to one day return to being confused, lost within my mind.

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Copyright 2004 DarkNTormented
Published on Monday, March 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Unforgiven Child On Friday, February 24, 2006, The Unforgiven Child (2)By person wrote:

    Nice work, Good stuff.

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    definitely dark n tormented, welcome to dp ( yes i know this greeting is a bit late ) XxkRYzxX

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, March 29, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    good luck to you well written

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