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disorder
By Exodus
Let it all pour out
Let it drown me to death
Purple hesitation in your memories
My eyes so stilled and different
The final drops of vitriol roll off my tongue,
Settled on the fixated heart beat.
The pounding rhythm of your voice
And I am awake in all that is distant to me.
x you’re suffocating me x
Pour the noise in a paper cup
Watch it as it bleeds the insanity.
My chaotic angel.
You’re blood is bane
God You're killing me
I’m your precious toy.
Do it all over again
All over again.
†dis order†
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Saturday, March 20, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Juggalotus
(69)
wrote:
I don't know what you were going for, but it represents, to me, the insistant repetition of pain in life. The only way to deal with it is to see it's presence and live on in spite of it. That's just me, though
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, birdwell
(138) wrote:
fantastic... what an entrancing poem, full of electric imagery ~db~
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Your style grows more abstract with each poem... it makes for fun deciphering. I love the first two lines in particular - the repetition really dragged me in. Yay. Rock on :)
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
The form of this is unique, and you paint such vivid colorful images. Great work! =) Morb
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A former member wrote:
Wow, Ex. Just... WOW. "Purple hesitation in your memories" Could this be any more amazing? I think not. It's perfect. ~Wish Upon A Star
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