Blindly Offensive

By sole

I can feel them peering down on me;
Those open eyes in the skies,
And I'll weep when their curtain falls
In the midst of life's induced cries.

To what do I owe
This regression of perfection's gaze?
To whom do I bestow
The fault laiden in these blinded days?

A contempt bellows deep inside
In the absense of that peer.
I've often wondered whom I've offended;
Shadowed in introspective fear.

Stemmed from thine own
The shudders of fault burden me,
And unluckily these eyes never close,
Never blink--they always see.

When the sky wakes up
And looks on me unquestionably,
Clarity reigns, realizations sustained--
The person I've offended, is me.

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Copyright 2004 sole
Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    I agree with Ship, very thought provoking, and the ending completely redirected where I was going when I read this. So true and beautifully expressed. ~L

  • A former member wrote: This was very thought provoking and the ending was a surprise. "And unluckily these eyes never close, Never blink--they always see." Self analysis is the cousin of a ruthless bastard. This was great. ~Ship!

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, March 18, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Urb said it perfectly (as usual). sole, its always great reading your stuff... this one inparticular was quite delectable. You are the only one you need to answer to. :::OLd

  • PointlessX On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, PointlessX (36)By person wrote:

    The last line is my fav! nice write--PointlessX

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