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eternitys sweltering sunbathe
By GoldenLotus
sweltering suns rays
dry my bodies dew
moist...for you,
have cooled the shelter
for my...sol...
glistens illuminous
upon my shell
the water----life,
rolling droplets
d
o
w
n my back
tracing perfectly curved
shadows.s.s.s.silhouettes
of love, glow around our auras
in reflected beauty
upon the surface...masks...
but in the eyes exists the key
to eternity
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Published on Wednesday, October 22, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
that's a good one
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On Friday, May 6, 2005, Kinkypoptart
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wrote:
great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Sunday, June 20, 2004, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
i really like the way that this was written, very enjoyable \m/
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
"For my...sol..." lol i'll take this for a poem for me :) regardless of its original intent! I loved the imagery here so romantic and subdued, sleepily depicting a beautiful scene
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
your style is unique and appreciated. The destination here is common but the path you took was plowed through a jungle. I enjoyed every bit. :::OLd
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