thirteen
By Exodus
and i screw up
wishing you would die.
its all my fault
but it feels better to blame this on you.
the train sounds to me
the loud, dirty washed, winded sound.
flying out and screaming death and f a s t
moving emotion
and i'm angry
i've gone all out again.
the razor blade befriends me
tells me it knows my pain.
and that it'll make it all go away
i just got home.
and i've been alone all damn day.
screaming at you nathan
you are screwing with me.
you let me go.
but like a leech i wont fucking go away.
i wont stop feeding off of you.
and they wont answer the phones..
ringing non stop
it calls.
the worst day of my life..
over.
and over
its over.
then i wake up to the cold daylight.
barely breaking the surface.
you all point and laugh...
and you, you tell me i did it wrong
and that this is all for attention
and i am.
i'm screaming for attention.
Comments on "thirteen"
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A former member wrote:
Great job!!! i loved it... **D.of.D**
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I love this, the way its written and everything. Nice job ;)
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
::nods in agreement with epochalypse:: this is also very well written. i think that everything i wanted to say has already been said. wonderful poem, Ex
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On Saturday, February 21, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
This was more honest than most would care to admit. A facet of powerful poetry ;) I like how you slowed down "f a s t," too, that was clever and effective, as was the leach simile. Another great one... keep it up, Kayla!
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On Friday, February 20, 2004, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
Attention is good. I seek not only attention, but the ability to control the attention I get. That is the unltimate goal. I'm sorry for those deprived of attention, at leats we can all find a way to express our needs. I felt a tear at the end of this poem