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Returning with Apathy
By LovedByAMiracle
translucent fabrications of reality
binding me to the ground.
Reeking of passion with a radiant glow
the scent that ties me down
Breathtaking twilights
from green glowing skies
Wilting away nature's uncertainty
and breaking these forceful ties.
Green valleys of plastic flowers
lit up by ice blue fires
put out by exaggerated lies
to bary unwanted desires
Lined cue cards of apathetical perks
Whispering words of devine norlmacy
waking me up from my dreams of life
living up to approved decency
Silent night fantasies
of running through purple clouds
Gripping tentacles pull
forcing my mania to dirty grounds
A long awaited parchment of your sympathy
breaking the ice of wasted years
dripping blue ink of impassive remarks
sarcastic thoughts of having no more fears
Reaching the end of the soiled dirt road
Circling back to my former being
yet tainted by unavoidable apathy
And former thoughts of fleeing
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Copyright 2004 LovedByAMiracle
Published on Wednesday, February 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Returning with Apathy"
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On Saturday, February 7, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235)
wrote:
your pieces have put a smile on my face...not very easy to do+Fallen One+
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A former member wrote:
Very nice, I like the third stanza. +T.P.U+
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A former member wrote:
"Silent night fantasies of running through purple clouds" Wow, liking it very much! Don't take it to heart about your background. I'm sure it was lovely! Though I didn't actually see it. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
ahhh....sounds like the many wasted days of my life....well done well done
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
great poem....but agrees with six...the back ground takes away from it and is irritating...jaded
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
The background made me not want to read. Pity, because it seemed like it might be good.
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
I took away the background, will you read it now:(
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