Anxious

By riCOCKulous

how vain i was, moments ago and how fast that has deminished...
my thought of you are all i know, my mind never seemes to finish...
feelings for you have grown each day, and by accident you come close...
emotions of mine have came around but im the opposite of what i was the most...
push myself away from you
hoping i can protect...
but all of my defense just wont do
love has become my own defect...
i have failed because of this, no wish or urge could help us...
i tried to keep you from this itch, this itch that made me anxious...

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Copyright 2004 direchangeling
Published on Monday, January 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mr King On Friday, December 17, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    beautiful.... cute... our humanity... our curse and our salvation...

  • Beautiful Scars On Saturday, April 3, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    I think this would flow nicely into lyrics..

  • Blood of Winter On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Nice piece Jami, I think it would make a even better song...

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    interesting work, nice flow. I like "this itch that made me anxious"... FF

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