When the Bottle Breaks and The Earth Quakes

By Loomer

I have a feeling one day
There might be a morning
Where I don't feel any different
From the night I spent before
To which it all carried over
For once and this time
I know exactly how I feel
And that it won't change
Not even for tomorrow
Or the next few days
I've done it all the wrong way
Said "maybe" one to many times
To which I can't shake
Every day I spent before




Thank you Brett Coker for the titled

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Copyright 2004 Loomer
Published on Thursday, August 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AHHH On Sunday, January 8, 2006, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    great, this is great.

  • riCOCKulous On Thursday, August 12, 2004, riCOCKulous (19)By person wrote:

    good flow, great meaning... keep it up babe. ~Nok

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