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I Ask I Want I Need I Scream in silence
By Jaded Jezzabelle
I ask you to...
Wake me up and take me
Strip me then whip me
Tease me to release me
Move me and groove with me
I want you to...
Have the insight to ignight me
Define me and confine me
Dare me to bare me
To crave and inslave me
I need you to...
Conspire to inspire me
Predict me and addict me
Desire me till you tire me
Submit and commit yourself to me
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Copyright 2004 Jadedwings
Published on Monday, January 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I Ask I Want I Need I Scream in silence"
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, flying_fox
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wrote:
This is a sharp, decisive write. I like the way it is so direct and 'in your face'... there's no mucking about with this one. Great stuff.
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A former member wrote:
if only i could be so bluntly honest to the people i need. im not too good at that. your title implies you arent either. this summed it all up very nicely though! i like your word choice and structure in this peice. i agree it was very intense!
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, WikidGrrl
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wow...i loved this...intense...*die-ana*
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