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Spin
By sole
Spindle tops, a novel microcosm.
Constantly revolving mechanisms,
Endless rippling reverberations
Reflecting a lively innovation.
A blurry circumference engulfing me,
Radially swallowing everything.
Spinning with a callous so selfishly
Ignoring this nausea afflicting.
Frictioned-feet under worldly rotations,
Stagnantly represent life's starvation.
Fasting to defy this permanent lust
For a clutch to churn this sediment rust.
Voluntarily I indebt my view
Upon this blurry hue that equals you.
Like life's voyeur, in quick sand I stand,
Envious of this globe shunning my hand.
Forced to remain degradation in vain,
Relative in point, I am motion's bane.
Spin away, up, under, and through;
Gandering eyes recount a blur that is you.
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Copyright 2004 sole
Published on Saturday, January 3, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Spin"
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On Sunday, January 4, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246)
wrote:
damn.. love the vocab. and the flow is realy catchy. Brilliant. Monkey
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On Monday, January 5, 2004, suicideseason
(1639) wrote:
i agree with the doc.this is a visually stimulating piece.you're very impressive sole.thanx~season
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On Sunday, January 4, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
ahh, look at the pretty vocab!! :) some lovely words here; nice rhythms too. purr
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On Monday, January 5, 2004, sole
(93) wrote:
Coming from you purr that's quite the compliment. Thanks for the other comments too guys, I was trying to give the poem a radial feel and really enjoyed writing it, glad to see y'all enjoyed reading it.
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On Sunday, January 4, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
every verse is slamming a door ... you're in the zone man - solid --funguy
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