My Addiction

By Jenni

The pills make me feel better,
the smoke that i inhail.
The things that i digest,
the way i seem to fail.
The drugs i need for me,
the drugs you need for you.
The money spent on this,
the me thats sniffing glue.
The things i need to have,
the things i need to take.
The addiction i need to fill,
the money i need to make.
The me thats drank to much,
the me that starts to choke.
The me that just keeps buying,
the me thats always broke.
The me that can't get enough,
the me that yet needs more.
The me thats losing everything,
the me becoming poor.
The me that can't take it,
the me that hopes i've died.
The me thats on the building
commiting suicide.

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Copyright 2003 EwWwWwWwWwIe
Published on Saturday, December 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow, this is amazing. great work.

  • Reefer_rave On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, Reefer_rave (146)By person wrote:

    "The drugs i need for me and the drugs I need for you"... cause we never share do we... This totally takes me away

  • Err0r On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    This is fricking brilliant. Everything flowed spectacularly. Except for the misspelling of inhale. lol. :D Fine piece of work.

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, January 10, 2007, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    This was excellent. Great flow and I loved the ending.

  • dismal silence On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, dismal silence (14)By person wrote:

    damn, a rerun of my teen years, absolutly loved it, outstanding write

  • A former member wrote: AWESOME! Great write. I've been there too whether it be chronic, crack, blow, acid, whatever it is you just cant get enough. and it sucks. I totally understand

  • yslehc On Thursday, March 17, 2005, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    i know exactly how that feels. for some reason the only word that i can think of for this is Beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: your poetry is amazing, mesmorizing, with simple verses but heart-breaking content and good rythm

  • A former member wrote: this flowed so fast it didnt seem forced at all great write ~~GOTHIC~~

  • Lotophagi On Thursday, October 21, 2004, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    So rapid, I can feel this pumping through my blood, heh, almost makes me excited at the thought of the last two lines.... that is the "me" being well, me. Thanks for the thrill :-)

  • nell On Sunday, July 18, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    this was wicked!!!! ok maybe not the best thing to say about this type of poem...but really it's cleverly done and fuckign perfect

  • Jenni On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, Jenni (40)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • blackdarkness On Monday, June 7, 2004, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    I love the way you end this...

  • WikidGrrl On Monday, May 31, 2004, WikidGrrl (26)By person wrote:

    i really like this...somewhat kinda but kinda not reminds me of me a few years back..very good!

  • Beautiful Scars On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    Wow..your poems alwyas suprise me at the end..suicide seems to be your friend. -fairy-

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