Second

By sole

If a dream were a sunrise
Warming the sands of a desert,
The journey would be an ill contrived,
Dehydrated present.

Often burned and distressed
In that unforgiving stare,
Grinding teeth and obsessed
With breathing the gritty air.

The heated day gives way
When the night grows cold,
And the moon shines to betray,
Eclipsing dreams of old.

Dry eyes and dusty shoes
Decide to dwell,
Despite dim candles
Burning the night without fail.

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Copyright 2003 sole
Published on Sunday, December 21, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mr King On Monday, December 22, 2003, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    truly poetic... i too am a weary traveller seeking a dream at noon... a burnin' mid-day bitch to realize... so i too, like you, seek that SUN now by the light of the moon... Merry X-mas 2u from Christ Vice.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, December 22, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    dispite dim candles... why dident I think of that.. *kicks himself* Sole this is a realy whispy write. *raises his hand in respect*

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