Numb

By asailorsangel

LOVE..........................
THE WAVE OF NUMBNESS HAS PASSED
THE ANGER AND THE HATE
HAVE ARISEN
GOD............................
HELP THE CHILDREN THAT
FEEL THE WRATH OF THEIR
OWN UNDOING
IT WILL MAKE THEIR SOULS BLEED
AND THEIR HEARTS BREAK

RT03'

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Copyright 2003 asailorsangel
Published on Sunday, December 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    raw and powerfull.. I like it. the structure is stuning

  • A former member wrote: Most religious based poems scare me. It seems so evil, even if the intentions are good. Ooooh!

  • purr_verse On Sunday, December 14, 2003, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    there is brutally raw, painful, final feeling about this... powerful and effective... purr

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