Amys First Time

By asailorsangel

She felt a need to explore
A need to see the other side.
Take a journey though her
Mind and find out the whys?

She walked circles in her mind,
In my mind and in their minds
Waiting for the sensation to
Arise.


In this state the shadows have
Never been so obscure and
The light never so bright.

Free your mind was the
Advice of the night. A
Shared moment that soon
Shall pass. A dance of dances
You should of felt it move.

The days have lingered by
And to her it has become
A memory of a roll on a
Straight line that has changed
The way reality looks
At lease in the dark?????

RT03?

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Copyright 2003 Renee Trinkaus
Published on Sunday, December 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dayer On Friday, September 10, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    I love this, it flows beautifully

  • A former member wrote: The thoughts of a woman in a coma perhaps? That is what this poem made me think of. An eternal dream.

  • manunkind On Sunday, December 14, 2003, manunkind (64)By person wrote:

    its so soft and pretty. i love it.

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