brother

By The_Scavenger

brother, brother
where are you?
brother, brother
How are you?
are you ok
are you hurt
can i see you
can i be near you
brother, brother
where have you gone?
have you gone back
back to your own
brother, brother
please come back
back were you belong

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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Monday, December 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Strong end, nice and simple

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    Good Write Kat.

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    i've never heard u read this one before i like it, something hits me the last line hits me the nost very nice job

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