One More Night

By freaky

Sitting here waiting
Waiting to see you walk through that door
It has seemed like a life time since I last saw you
You are the one that shines light on my sometimes dark world
Finally after what has seemed like forever I see you
You're standing there tall, dark and oh so handsome
Your hair so long and nice in that ponytail
I just want to pull that ponytail holder out so bad
Run my fingers through your hair
Your eyes look as blue as the ocean
Dressed in all black, you know the Goth look
You and I see each other and our eyes lock
It's as if there is no one in the room but us
I feel your arms enclose around me hugging me tight
In my mind I'm thinking please don't ever let go
I would do anything just to kiss you right now
Sadly I know I can't, you're with her and not me
But tonight it's only you and me alone together
Your mind is set on me tonight with no thoughts of her to invade
How I long to feel your soft lips upon mine
We walk into the elevator to go upstairs
We find our seats, you sit behind me
I lean back to find your arms around me once again
The show starts, you get closer, holding me in your strong arms
I feel the warm air of your breathe on the back of my neck
Your singing, hearing your voice almost puts me in a state of ecstasy
God you're making this so hard not to just turn around
And make all thoughts of her disappear into the abyss
The night is almost over, why can't this last forever?
We've had our arms around each other the whole night
I don't wanna let go, no not tonight
Being with you has made me so happy
The show ends, you hug me goodnight
My eyes never leave you even as you walk out that door
You look perfect in everyway as you always have been
One more night that's all I want
To be with you would make me feel like I was in heaven
Please can I have just one more night with you?

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Copyright 2003 freaky
Published on Tuesday, November 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Swift On Saturday, February 24, 2007, Swift (35)By person wrote:

    This really made my heart go into shock or pain... such a lovely poem. Such true lines of emotion and love. ~Amber

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 8, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Reminded me of a country song I heard one time. The point of the country song was one more *day* in the case would leave you wishing for one more and one more and one more... you get the point. Great write the feelings were very much understood~*~Tart~*

  • Savannah On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    this made my heart hurt...

  • Cwn Annwn On Friday, January 2, 2004, Cwn Annwn (91)By person wrote:

    I loved some one once....and the last day I was going to get to see them I just let them walk away...I am now living in regret...Who ever this person is..dont let them slip away..tell them how you feel ~GoNe~

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    the sincerity in this piece tugs at me...very good write...-l-

  • Drea On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    *breathes*...my heart was beating so fast as i read this.. steph this is great. wow...to my favorites list it goes....~Drea~

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