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Unwanted despondency relives
By Jadednoir
Cannot soothe, cannot numb this awakening
i have felt it for some time
I keep wanting to ask
What are you doing tonight?
Tonight, tonight stars will burn bright
Send the blessing of the Rain
To my touch, to my sight
Longing for a moment into a sweet serenity
I have never lifted from this plateau
"I will take my place, in the Great Below"
Tendrils of petals annionted with gloom
Airily float upon the winds breath
And the moon
nulify the chaos, the heaven and bliss
I'd rather remain in purgatory for an enternity
pondering over this
Can we sit and meditate
our vibes contract, exact, they permeate
The planes of existence will still rotate
Tendrils of arcane aromas
Drifting into space
Our souls become paradoxal waste
Cannot soothe, Cannot numb this awakening
I have felt it for sometime, the sours of my haste
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Copyright 2003 Jadednoir
Published on Sunday, November 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Unwanted despondency relives"
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On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
Longing for a moment into a sweet serenity... aren't we all? Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
'Tendrils of petals annionted with gloom' Beautiful in all it's gloom; strange enough, this reminds me of Shakespeare's Ariel in The Tempest.
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On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, pushblood
(27) wrote:
Beautiful....The four senesces all came through on this poem. Incredibly descriptive...I would love to hear this read to me...You best get your post card out... Thanks..~P.B~
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
very nice...-l-
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Jadednoir
(28) wrote:
Thankyou.... yes, maynard is a prophet....lets make a religion..... Maynardism.... or not.
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Good write. and Tool is the greatest band ever. Maynard is a prophet.
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