Trick Or Treat
By Bloody_Hands
Laughs are heard
Through out the night
False screams of terror
Running children
Bags of candy
Knocks on doors
Trick or Treat
Trick or treat
I want to end it all
I watch as children run
From house to house
Demand candy
What is the use
How about a trick
Come on in
And figure it out
Can you find the answer
There is no escape
You can run
You can hide
But in the end
There is nothing
Nothing left for you
Screams now of terror
No longer of joy
Can you find the trick
Can you solve the mystery
Will you try and get away
Even at the cost of life
Bring it all to a close
Without a moments pause
You are cornered
Your small body trembles
I taste your fear
I laugh at myself
If only you knew
You could leave
But you don’t
You never could
My hand descends
And you crumble
Your form lay there
On the cold ground
I grab your arm
I shove you down
With all the others
I have collected
I hear their screams
Their plea’s and cry’s
They want out
But the cant
They asked
Trick or treat
Trick or treat
I gave a trick
Not their treat
Comments on "Trick Or Treat"
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A former member wrote:
lol twisted twisted twisted. Reminds me of a mix between Tx chainsaw massacre and People under the stairs. Fantastic. ~Ship!
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, Diva_Satanica
(74) wrote:
wow.that is worst then the witch on Handsel and Gretal..woo-D.S
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On Friday, November 7, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
lol you freak.. great poem i love it
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On Friday, November 28, 2003, Velvet_Raventon
(446) wrote:
Freak indeed =) And with so much talent! Velvet.
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A former member wrote:
Note to self: Don't go trick or treating in your neighborhood.
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On Monday, November 3, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
damn haunting...
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A former member wrote:
sick. i love it..
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
LOL how fun. Great write. Twisted, but fun. :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
hmmmm...i liked the idea and the end mostly :) good piece!
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A former member wrote:
wow... this is a very good poem... loved it... found it pretty funny tho but hey thats me...~*Witch*~
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On Saturday, November 1, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
wow...very sinister image...you must be a marilyn manson fan...lol...very good poem, tho....
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A former member wrote:
oooo. i like this. it paints a nice image in your head... well maybe not so nice. :)