The Pianist
By Chameleon
The sky outside is impossibly grey,
but the keys, white and black
sing to me in a orange tonality.
I sing through the haze of my smoking cigarette
'bout the streets of New York.
Though I've never been there,
I saw a news flash;
It was raining there too.
The millions in the city sit in my shoes...
I've dreamt New York in my head
while singing in the city of angels,
watching pipe dreams float
outside the window,
hanging like cotton above the 101.
The people dance and throw up a cheer on Ventura Blvd
as I tip my hat and the waiter who serves another Jack.
We're all energy and so my notes dance just like me
as a girl serenades whimsically across my living room.
The world is a beautiful and dreamy place
on a rainy Sunday when set to music...
I ring on the keys as the mallets hit the strings:
A girl in New York sheds a tear-
the rain from the beautiful seranade
forming itself inside her head.
She knows in those rainy streets,
the musical that rewinds
in her fragile little daydream-
she is full of love,
From the city of Angels
to New York, to the city of Angels again,
music is the universal language...
And the rain stops.
I take a bow:
thunderous
cheer from the sky
...for her city no longer weeps.
Comments on "The Pianist"
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On Saturday, March 1, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
la de da de de da aaaaaaaaah... billy would be proud too.
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A former member wrote:
*listens to the music of our sphere in quiet contemplation* This speaks on an entirely subliminal level.
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Wow. It reminds me of a movie. It just plays like one in my mind.
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
*but the keys,white and black sing to me in a orange tonality*another fantastic write full of awesome wordplay and dedicated emotion.everything i've read thus far is flawless.****-knight
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
i must thank six for recomending you to me.you are definitely a talented poet.*bows*
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
unlike anything ive read,i relate to this as if i was relating to memories from film fragments,such sweeping action and flow and style in this,absolutely masterful
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
I think the ending was spectacular. Fantasic work. :::OLd
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On Friday, June 25, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Absolutely magical.. I got lost in this so much, such an atmosphere and flow of wording, I could quote every line and say I loved it.. incredible, I am truly stunned.
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On Friday, October 17, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
*tips his hat* Frank Sinatra would be proud...
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
I have lost the words to discribe the way this made me feel and beautiful doesn't seem right, I am kind of in awe .............O.
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
wow, powerful write. Last stanza's great