Shush
By LIFEINVADER
In my face, a gaping space so wide,
the mouth, where thoughts and words do bide,
from mind to toe, they take their flight,
seeking truth, or weaving a slight.
My tongue, no bones to hold its sway,
speaks freely, night and day,
though my heart may bear a scar,
it still beats on, both near and far.
In confusion's grasp, we sometimes fall,
when heart and mind don't sync at all,
I must express, release the reign,
words the wind beneath my wings remain.
The subtle word, my foe at times,
causing pain with its wicked chimes,
in language, unkindness may reside,
leaving tears, no secrets to hide.
My tongue, it's bound, can't break the chain,
silenced by teeth, a captive's bane,
no singing, no shouting, no outcry,
in silence, my tongue, it's left to lie.
Comments on "Shush"
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On Wednesday, November 1, 2023, Adagios
(716) wrote:
Not just the flow but the focus, it’s a laser leading to an inevitable end. Harpstring taught. Excellent write brother.
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On Wednesday, November 1, 2023, LIFEINVADER
(278) wrote:
Glad you felt it, be safe.
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On Monday, October 16, 2023, I IS ME
(380) wrote:
Dude, totally love your flow. We agree with SolApathy on this piece. Tight work
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On Wednesday, November 1, 2023, LIFEINVADER
(278) wrote:
Thank you for your words. Cheers.
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2023, SolApathy
(652) wrote:
"when heart and mind don't sync at all, I must express, release the reign, words the wind beneath my wings remain."- Such an eloquent write, loved those lines. You are a true artisan of the craft.
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On Friday, September 29, 2023, LIFEINVADER
(278) wrote:
Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it. Cheers.
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On Friday, September 22, 2023, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
A brilliant classical rhyming piece on the loose tongue and the mind attached.
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On Sunday, September 24, 2023, LIFEINVADER
(278) wrote:
Thank you for the read. Cheers.