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My breath the sea
By Silver Spectre
Thunder crashes the shore
Just above the place
Where in by my treasures keep
My future cast in one breath
In the depths but not so deep
I tell you it is not her
But another dream held secretly
To dive into the ocean
To leave this shore
My breath the sea
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Copyright 2003 Silver Spectre
Published on Friday, October 3, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, urbanhumility
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wrote:
having a timless feel, as if the past has somthing wise to say........well done "poet"...........urban
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A former member wrote:
wow this piece is dripping in beauty. it's great
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A former member wrote:
Well hmm...how about that? Another wonderful poet has joined us. This is very beautiful.
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On Monday, October 6, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
*sighs*...beautiful..so many images come to mind.. and i guess thats how it should be. everyone will get something different out or this.. and for me... it made me smile.. made me think of love...wonderful write..~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
I really love this.I don't know how to describe it...its almost abstract in a way.It leaves room for interpretation...yet it creates such a strong image."But another dream held secretly"lovely line.Dusky..xxx...
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On Friday, October 3, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
another dream held secretly....i like that line the most....great write
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