Silent Seizure

By Queazenart

If the sun does not come up today
It will be fine because neither will I.
Vibrating under bedsheets until my molecules dissipate
I would have liked to die in my sleep.

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Copyright 2018 Queazenart
Published on Wednesday, June 26, 2019.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • tmanzano On Wednesday, July 3, 2019, tmanzano (207)By person wrote:

    Your ending line insinuates a past tense wish. Interesting... how DID you die?

  • Samael Crowe On Sunday, October 28, 2018, Samael Crowe (173)By person wrote:

    the first two lines are very intense, gave me goosebumps... I sense a feeling of lethargy and giving up

  • dwells On Sunday, October 28, 2018, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Ahh but if it could only be so at the end my friend Queaz. Sometimes I think we are being punished, or tested...Cheers! - Dan

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