Come Black Night

By midnights voice

Come Black Night



Come black night
I envy thy heart
I dwells upon the indecisions
You lash out in the dark

Thy cold comfort
The age in my bones
Your sly wink
I won't be here long

All is so futile
Flowers for grave
I see Eleanor Rigby
No one was saved

All of those lonely people
just words to the song
Two rights together
Don't make up a wrong

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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Monday, May 7, 2018.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Drea On Thursday, May 10, 2018, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    This left me in a cold place. You always choose the perfect picture to accompany your words.

  • midnights voice On Thursday, May 10, 2018, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    Thank you Dreams for reading . I was just reading your new poem and formulating my comment .

  • I IS ME On Monday, May 7, 2018, I IS ME (380)By person wrote:

    We don't know why we just think electrons. Same place, same time, just bouncing off each other, no cohesiveness.

  • midnights voice On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    Ha ha , smashing comment I Is Me .

  • Arwen On Monday, May 7, 2018, Arwen (187)By person wrote:

    Oh loneliness is such a monster.

  • midnights voice On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    Thank you Wednesday Addams for reading and lonely comment 😄

  • A former member wrote: This has a fatalistic undertone and the picture sums it all up. Good job. (Anne-Lauren)

  • I IS ME On Monday, May 7, 2018, I IS ME (380)By person wrote:

    That picture along with this poem. We think of electrons constantly bouncing off each other.

  • midnights voice On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    Wouldn't those electrons smashing into each other be atomic ! Thank you I Is Me for reading and commenting .

  • Adagios On Monday, May 7, 2018, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    Wow, poignant and potently written. Excellent!

  • midnights voice On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much Adagios for reading and commenting

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