Coincidentally
By midnights voice
in the dark room
without curtains
on the window
the bold have withered
like the fish
out of water
I hid the moonbeams
cut their threads
without distinction
I hid your collection
of the sharp things
that made you subjective
And the stars are so cold
representing a life that was lost
the lost were the bold
that paid at such a cost
you made a promise
just so
you could break it
you told a lie
with red ribbons
around pink carnations
So on the morning
of deliverance
you made an exception
like the train
down at station
you looked good in cold
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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Friday, January 19, 2018.
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On Sunday, January 21, 2018, dwells
(4177) wrote:
The sharp things that made you subjective...A piercing and poignant muse to be sure MV. The clarity of insight through pain perhaps; but it can be a viscous cycle. Cheers my friend! - Dan
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On Monday, January 22, 2018, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Thank you Dan for your insightful comment .
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On Saturday, January 20, 2018, Jerry stiles
(235) wrote:
Great write ,,as always,,,
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On Saturday, January 20, 2018, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Thank you Jerry as always .
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On Friday, January 19, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
"you look good in cold" is my favorite line. It would be hot to see a bird man in real life I think while running with my head turned haha!
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On Friday, January 19, 2018, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Yes isn't it amazing how people go to a viewing and say he looks so good . We probably couldn't outrun a a fast flying bird-man . Thank you Wednesday . And Happy Birthday .
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On Saturday, January 20, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
Thank you midnights voice!
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On Friday, January 19, 2018, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
"and the stars are so cold" was a huge anchor for me on this piece. Great work. Also, the picture leaves me wondering about globalization and how ideas travel and did the idea of this bird deity (can't find the name of it) get there through travel or was there really a bird/human hybrid deity... leaves my head slightly spinning.
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On Friday, January 19, 2018, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Yes it is all very intriguing like the hammer found in solid rock that is 40 million years old ot the frozen forest recently uncovered from melting ice in Antarctica that is 200 million years old from which they were able to extract DNA from .
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On Friday, January 19, 2018, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I love all the new finds they've been digging up. Would love to know the solutions to some of the world's mysteries.