The Old Home
By midnights voice
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The boards creek and moan
from time and poor carpentry
The nails gripped by aged wood
have become crust collected
and shrunken to form
The bare walls once displayed
the smiling faces of past eons
But now there are only the faded remnants
of square foundations
that once hung on the wall
The stairs complain like an old man
from unsubstantiated fears
The second floor seems solid
only responding to the
remarks of my shoes
The old bedroom
was once the center of attraction
Overlooks the buckled sidewalks
and weed infested yards
of a street that has no cars or people passing by
I stand in silence for the moment
and the moment stands silent for me
And for that moment I lay in time's
eternal graveyard in hopes of
reviving dead dreams
Comments on "The Old Home"
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On Sunday, December 10, 2017, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Wow. Great poem. I could picture all of it. So well done. JD
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On Tuesday, July 4, 2017, Drea
(1388) wrote:
The last stanza was perfect. This reminded me of when I recently visited my childhood home. It was bittersweet.
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On Wednesday, July 5, 2017, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Home is where you make your memories at . Thank you Drea for reading .
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On Tuesday, July 4, 2017, worm
(1149) wrote:
MV, as the old saying goes, "you can never go home"... Well done! ~worm~
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On Tuesday, July 4, 2017, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
Oh , so true worm , appreciate the read .