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Birds to save me...
By TheMistressBucket
Sitting on this roof top
Throwing rocks at rats with wings
Praying that they band together
Grasp me with their little bird feet
And drop me
Down
Down
Down
Plummeting towards hot asphalt
I would thank them
For being so merciful
I would praise them
For caring enough to defend themselves
From the monster that is me.
I would love them
for granting me this bitter sweet
release.
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Copyright 2003 TheMistressBucket
Published on Tuesday, September 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Birds to save me..."
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A former member wrote:
lol interesting write. I like the idea of the rats sprouting wings and forming an army to strike back at the striker. Cool stuff. ~Ship!
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On Thursday, May 27, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175)
wrote:
Wow, this is very creative and original. I would never have thought of this myself. -fairy-
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
"rats with wings"... you got to love that! your work is so raw and emotional that you have hooked me like a fish... and that's not an easy thing to do!
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
"for granting me this bittersweet release" I love this. I must see more.
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