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To You: An Open Letter
By Salty Ships
It is
in
my being
and bones
what I harbor for you.
It is
like
the home of lights
and the wine of wind
what I harbor for you.
It is
the
calm
and rage of the storms
what I harbor for you.
It
is
just
you.
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Copyright 2015 Salty Ships
Published on Wednesday, May 13, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, June 2, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580)
wrote:
Gentle and romantic, while promising a storm. Nice work! Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, May 14, 2015, my soul whispers
(5) wrote:
I like how the cadence changes in the fourth stanza by splitting "It is" into two lines. To me it gives it a very clipped rhythm...almost as if the speaker is resigned.
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
I love the way this reads, so choppy, like the sea.. Which is pretty freaking cool, haha.. Great write, I love this:)
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