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~Swirling in Motion~
By asailorsangel
Swirling in motion
Dropped from the sky
The mirror image of
Her soul lay before
Her
He of such beauty
Strength and power
Only she knew how easily
He would fall from his
Grace
She warned him in stern
To follow the light of his soul
Once an aura of crystal blue
Is gray and lifeless full of lies &
Deceit
Her hands as dirty as a peasant
Beggar rattling an empty tin cup
Who knew she would
Clip his wings just to watch him
Fall
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Copyright 2003 asailorsangel
Published on Friday, September 5, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "~Swirling in Motion~"
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On Saturday, November 18, 2017, Just Dave
(448)
wrote:
Wow. Great poem. Great flow. Great emotion. Thanks, JD
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
excellent, her grace deciet fall, and a nice flwoa s well, well done *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
hell yes.. this was good.. Monkey
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A former member wrote:
Sounds like a very naughty girl taking the innosence of an angel.
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, asailorsangel
(34) wrote:
what if the angel took mine??? love ya markus!!!!
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On Friday, September 5, 2003, worm
(1149) wrote:
oh yeah... this one is good! this has a nice flow to it... keep it up!
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On Friday, September 5, 2003, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
very deep, and well written. i enjoyed this.... *stops to read more works* †Chérie†
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