Rented Labyrinth(Burgundy Myth)
By Dark Unicorn
Dark memories of grey fade in a flowy haze,
As I awaken entranced in a midnight maze,
A crimson labyrinth whose shameless secrets remain,
And whose serpentine alleys twist beyond age's train.
A flash of death flutters swiftly before my eyes,
And in Death's vision I fumble for my disguise,
My unsightly mask I wear beneath my face,
And upon my dainty countenance it adds an air of grace.
Ominous blue skeletons claw through my spine,
And leave a scent of vermillion,so dark yet divine
As beads of steel crawl out of my skull,
And a scream like Lucifer's kiss echoes hollow and dull.
Engulfed in a mist of dread that surges from deep within,
I watch the burgundy walls peel off my plastic skin
And there a barrage of butterflies sails down with strands of glass
Within their reflection I know this maze will come to pass.
Comments on "Rented Labyrinth(Burgundy Myth)"
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A former member wrote:
I really loved the third stanza (and the rest too, naturally!).. The imagery was imposing.. I would like to dwell there too.. :)
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On Friday, July 18, 2014, Dark Unicorn
(49) wrote:
Well come on then!All are welcome !
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On Tuesday, May 20, 2014, Dark Unicorn
(49) wrote:
Thank you.I hope so too.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
May you find your way out of that maze eventually....nicely done...
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On Friday, April 25, 2014, Dark Unicorn
(49) wrote:
Thank you very much.I didn't think it was good:)
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On Friday, April 25, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Wow. Stunning work, Dark Unicorn. I love the effort you put into this; 10