star, burning slowly
By FadedBlues
one night can last a lifetime.
an iron memory, forged of passion.
she may have arrived like a star
descending, burning slowly
in that low cut dress,
the entrancing fullness of her breasts.
a man could put his lips there
on that trembling flesh,
and never want to remove them
for something as banal as eating…
the sheen of her long raven hair,
glistened like diamond chips
imbedded in coal dust,
under a candled chandelier.
her face: Irish-cream skin, dew-dropped.
dark eyes, that spoke a gypsy’s promise.
lips that would never kiss mine.
in my dream, we dance slowly.
somewhere far away, the mournful
sound of ‘Mr. Lonely’
…the irony of it chokes me…
love is a bug that bites like a tiger,
leaves a blissful wound,
a wildfire fever.
I will die with that face in my head,
that song in my ear...
Comments on "star, burning slowly"
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On Thursday, January 2, 2014, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. beautiful & rare are the ladies that inspire dreams, & poems...
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On Thursday, January 2, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
Wow, what a tempting tale of longing... This is fantastic, wonderful job :)
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On Thursday, January 2, 2014, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
Mr Lonely….I remember him from a poem not too long ago.. lol We all hope to be thought of in this way. Well done..leaves a reader longing for love
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On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Painfully Romantic is the scene that you scourge within us. "love is a bug that bites like a tiger" that is powerful penning of a heart's tribulations:)~ Love it, Blues*
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On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, Numbers Peppelini
(74) wrote:
Oh man how you can make one fall in love with falling in love. "If I didn't know better"