sky of dying stars

By FadedBlues

sky of dying stars

 
 
the battle rages on. tracers pierce the obsidian night, quick flashes
of death eating the air. the enemy’s thunderous guns drive us mad,
and still we advance. cowardly stars slowly fade from the sky.
 
the luck that has shielded me is savagely torn away, as a bullet rips
flesh above my hip, burning, just as the sacred side of Christ was
desecrated by a Roman spear. another round finds me, & another; I
stumble & drop to the mud. perhaps a dozen stars, bravely, still shine.
 
in my daze, I sense a comrade grab me & drag me back. like a broken
marionette, I am tossed into a jeep with other wounded, driven to a
makeshift field surgical unit, to the rear of our line.
 
dysphoria clouds me, ghostly memories rise like Lazarus. I see the
children of my village playing in the dirt road, mimicking soldiers,
sticks for weapons. I watch my mother weeping, as I march to battle.
and there is the oak tree, where I sheltered from the Spring rain with
an auburn-haired girl, maiden of the willows, who startled me with
kisses. all the admiring stars in the sky regaled us, whispering ‘this
is love, & it is good.’ for one moment I embrace the vision of her,
whose lips I will never taste again…
 
barely conscious, I am on a gurney in the open air, medical personnel
probing my flesh, chasing bits of metal, evacuating blood, suturing,
under a sweating, dimming sky. abruptly they cease, their barely heard
mumbles telling me their efforts are wasted.
 
the final star blinks out. the black sky descends. it covers me like a
shroud, & I sleep, in absolute peace
 
beyond all the calendared morrows.




 

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Published on Sunday, December 15, 2013.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Void Vortex On Saturday, January 4, 2014, Void Vortex (298)By person wrote:

    Beautifully told, with miles of depth! You have really aware perception!

  • A former member wrote: I admire your pen work. This is simply a true work of art. Inspiring.

  • FadedBlues On Monday, December 16, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. a depiction of the only peace that comes...

  • A former member wrote: heartbreaking. ethereal. moralizing. very personal . . . thank you for sharing. Absolutely wonderful work: 10/10 I especially loved the "oak tree, spring rain, and auburn haired girl" sentences . . . beautiful prose work.

  • NikesRain On Sunday, December 15, 2013, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    chilling and raw with that drop of an inhale of something softer nestled in the middle making the real all too real... as always vivid and tangible and thoroughly engrossing... *tips hat*

  • blue angel On Sunday, December 15, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Chilling and raw. Traumatic events unfold before my eyes , blues. you have a very powerful pen. I feel this deeply :)~

  • PoetessDarkly On Sunday, December 15, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awe blue I admire your ability to capture that dark moment. You are blessed in the pen.

  • A former member wrote: This is an amazing...AMAZING...piece...It inspired me...I love this..

  • ColourGod On Sunday, December 15, 2013, ColourGod (43)By person wrote:

    While I know this is real I know that it is also not. Great experience and a heart beats deeper for humanity in this. Great write.

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