Party From Hell

By Killerdemonchick

My eyes blur
As the tears form
My words slur
As the alcohol fills me, so warm...
My arms swing
As the music plays loud
My fingers sting
As the drugs put me on a cloud
My body goes slack
As the ground raises to me
My mouth lies open just a crack
As the person puts a hand on my knee
My legs kick out
As the person shows me a smile
My body feels through out
As the person does a trial
My heart starts to break
As the person takes me away
My insides start to ache
As the person has their way
my fingers start to move
As the person starts to leave
My feeling starts to improve
As the person tells me I was so naive
My body starts to tingle as feeling returns
As the person pulls away my innocence at the seams
My stomach churns
As the night is filled with my screams

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Copyright 2013 Killerdemonchick
Published on Thursday, August 8, 2013.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

just a bit of shit i made up today. hope you enjoy
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  • Commander_Cadaver On Friday, September 6, 2013, Commander_Cadaver (245)By person wrote:

    Very well written, even for a dark subject.

  • A former member wrote: I've never had to experience this, and I hope I never do, but the line about "As the drugs put me on a cloud" resonates with me at the moment. "As the person...", makes you think, how many are really capable of such acts?

  • andhaka On Thursday, August 8, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    This is so effortlessly carried out. You transition from moment to moment of this horror story so easily. I really enjoyed this piece. :)

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