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Tis Not Always Better to Give Than Receive
By poe_lover28
this pitter
patter
of your tears
take
take
away all those years
of pain and hurt
the ketchup bottle squirt
on your brand new shirt
those days
feeling
so alone
to be secluded
you feel
prone
pitter
patter
of those tears
rewind
all those
years
ill take
take all those
years
wipe
wipe
away every tear
i feel happier
with you near
so give
give
me all your pain
i promise
im already
stained
so let me take
take
all the strife
so you can have
a better
life
ill take
take
all that pain
so my sweet
happiness
you will gain
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Copyright 2013 poe_lover28
Published on Saturday, July 20, 2013.
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On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Devilish
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wrote:
Aweeeee baby.. you fucking rock you lil poetess. touch me where the sun shines.. loll i love you .
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On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Ohh Devv (: I'm happy you like it, you are one of my role models on here, thank you very much (:
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A former member wrote:
Very nice and gloomy.
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On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Well is suppose tears are rain drops of emotion in the storm of life and can be gloomy, but they can also be beautiful
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A former member wrote:
very harmonic and a very sweet write, it'd make a good song
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On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Thank you, I was thinking of making a beat and speaking it to said beat on soundcloud . Glad you enjoyed (:
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A former member wrote:
Aww this is so sweet, I like it, the repetition gives it a more personal touch.
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On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Awhhh thank you Cam♥ You always have wonderful comments
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