Tis Not Always Better to Give Than Receive

By poe_lover28

this pitter
patter
of your tears
take
take
away all those years
of pain and hurt
the ketchup bottle squirt
on your brand new shirt
those days
feeling
so alone
to be secluded
you feel
prone
pitter
patter
of those tears
rewind
all those
years
ill take
take all those
years
wipe
wipe
away every tear
i feel happier
with you near
so give
give
me all your pain
i promise
im already
stained
so let me take
take
all the strife
so you can have
a better
life
ill take
take
all that pain
so my sweet
happiness
you will gain

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Copyright 2013 poe_lover28
Published on Saturday, July 20, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Devilish (3758)By person wrote:

    Aweeeee baby.. you fucking rock you lil poetess. touch me where the sun shines.. loll i love you . Scholar

  • poe_lover28 On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28 (248)By person wrote:

    Ohh Devv (: I'm happy you like it, you are one of my role models on here, thank you very much (:

  • portix4 On Saturday, July 20, 2013, portix4 (34)By person wrote:

    Very nice and gloomy.

  • poe_lover28 On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28 (248)By person wrote:

    Well is suppose tears are rain drops of emotion in the storm of life and can be gloomy, but they can also be beautiful

  • medicatedisunderstated On Saturday, July 20, 2013, medicatedisunderstated (113)By person wrote:

    very harmonic and a very sweet write, it'd make a good song

  • poe_lover28 On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28 (248)By person wrote:

    Thank you, I was thinking of making a beat and speaking it to said beat on soundcloud . Glad you enjoyed (:

  • A former member wrote: Aww this is so sweet, I like it, the repetition gives it a more personal touch.

  • poe_lover28 On Saturday, July 20, 2013, poe_lover28 (248)By person wrote:

    Awhhh thank you Cam♥ You always have wonderful comments

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