Underland

By Razor-kissed-wrists

Falling down the rabbit hole
Gone in a puff of smoke
Faint cat like smiles in pale moonlight 
Following the white rabbit 
Little blue jacket
Everything seems so wonderful
Down here in Underland
Until you get to the river of blood and heads
Spilled by the Red Queen
Not by her own hands. No.
She got in their heads
Made them feel worthless 
They took their own lives
Their blood paints white roses a crimson red
What am I on? To be this far gone?
I decided to stay awhile 
And I fell for the Hatter 
He's mad you know? 
What we did down in Underland 
Is imprinted on my skin forever
Every touch
Kiss
Everytime we made love after tea 
Now it's time to say goodbye to all of the wonders of Underland
The strange people and animals will be a memory 
And Underland will be a dream 
One thousand miles from me 

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Copyright 2013 Razor-kissed-wrists
Published on Friday, June 28, 2013.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Seriously I was so high when I wrote this, I don't remember what I was on. I just really like this poem. Even if it doesn't make sense.
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  • NarcissusNarcosis On Friday, June 28, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis (94)By person wrote:

    Cool piece...I love writing when I'm wasted, some really interesting ideas always come to mind... Love your spin on this psychedelic tale, you nailed it... -NN

  • A former member wrote: a nice twist on Alice... good imagery and a strange ride...

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