Unfelt Touch, Missed So Much

By poe_lover28

heartbeat quickens
happiness spreads
because of you i no longer feel dead

love for you grows
in such a short time
getting to you is such a high climb

but this mountain will be conquered
missing a touch never felt
oh my sweet you make me melt

so many feelings you have unlocked
a bond we have found, never to break
many a more promises we will make

i will find you my darling in this perilous sea
because my love we are meant to be

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Published on Tuesday, June 25, 2013. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Unfelt Touch, Missed So Much"

On Tuesday, October 29, 2013, Peyton1 (204) wrote:

This is a very touching piece, a beautifully described journey. They say it's the journey, not the destination, that's most important. But then....I was always the one digging through the box for the prize before even pouring the cereal into the bowl! LOL Nicely done miss Lover28, much enjoyed. Glad ya made it back here to DP!
A former member wrote: This is touching and uplifting. Its nice to read a happier poem every once in a while. Great write!
On Monday, July 1, 2013, Phalanx (628) wrote:

This is adorable, definitely a good piece. Good to see you more cheerful.
On Sunday, June 30, 2013, Manperson96 (23) wrote:

10/10 great write. Keep those spirits high
On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, Deviated09 (90) wrote:

Ah, love's stronghold. Keep it close, M'dear. Good write!
A former member wrote: This is quite the moving piece, so beautifully written. Also its very positive and hopeful, love it.
On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28 (163) wrote:

Thank you Cameron. Your comments always mean so much to me.
A former member wrote: Ah, this poem is so touching and sweet and lovely. Reading this makes me smile. Beautiful.
On Tuesday, June 25, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Very sweet piece of a long journey to a destination to conquer the lonliness.
On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28 (163) wrote:

Yes , what a journey that would bw
A former member wrote: To touch and to feel...you've captured the moment just fine!
On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28 (163) wrote:

Why thank you
A former member wrote: This poem was very good in my opinion. The rythem was good, and the concept was clear, but not so clear that it was straightforward.
On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28 (163) wrote:

Thank you very much (: