Midnight Snack
By Diva_Satanica
This craving I crave,
I rise from out of my shallow grave.
On the streets I quickly stalk,
I spot them as they head out for midnight walk.
I run closer, careful not to make a sound,
quickly I hide as they turn around.
Out from the shadows I attack,
He goes down with a swift whack.
I grab her as she tries to run,
Oh killing is such great fun!
I viciously chew at her neck,
she has breathed her last breath.
I lap the blood flowing from her gouged eyes,
blood doesnt flow long after someone dies.
her vial bones are already broken,
leaving her carcass to be easily ripped open.
eating her liver, lungs and intestines,
the tender heart is now mine.
I eagerly tear it out with my hand,
drink a bit more blood then I stand.
held the organ up toward the crimson light,
devouring it in meerly two bites.
Extreemly satesfied, I walk back down the street,
the ground and my feet barely meet.
I am back in the cemetary,
out of energy, I soon need to rebury.
down I go back into the ground,
But only untill the next red moon comes around.
Comments on "Midnight Snack"
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A former member wrote:
Very Very kewl...great rhyming scheme...wow!
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A former member wrote:
yummy. i like. great flow. :)
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A former member wrote:
HAMBURGER.
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...oooh, yes! your words feed my hungry appetite...I applaud your masterpiece... -Darun
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A former member wrote:
Here you have a different but certainly interesting way of writing. I enjoyed this one very much. *Lilith*
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
Lol...Goretry eh, sounds like a plan...*inspired*
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On Thursday, August 21, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
Quite disgusting my sweet! +Fallen Angel+
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
wow, that was...vivid. I love it :) *~seraph~*
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i agree with aurora. i too had a grin on my face. great read. nicely put. i love your work. ~Drea~
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i love this! i got a big grin as i read it, awesome job.