Sad goodbye

By DePriest

Distant eyes are fixed upon you
they watch your every move

moving slowly across your body
from your toes to head you sooth

The inner termoil thats inside
the lonliness, the fight

If I could only speak to you
I could win you over tonight

A night of absolute pleasure
a chance to forget the pain

your soft flesh against my own
to feel alive again

Your hand is my hand
you read my every thought

You please my every desire
your sweet lips I have sought

Lost in my own emotions
the passions so deep inside

Our time together was precious
in your heart I forever reside.

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Published on Tuesday, January 8, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Guess this will be my last work. Only 1 more day and my membership expires. Just had to share once more.

Comments on "Sad goodbye"

On Wednesday, March 6, 2013, Elle Amore (17) wrote:

This hit me right where it hurts. Feels like my own thoughts. Thank you for sharing. This is beautiful.
A former member wrote: Nice One Beasty.. I Feel You..
On Saturday, February 9, 2013, DePriest (15) wrote:

Thanks a lot Dee Man
A former member wrote: nice flow to this... it feels like letting go.
A former member wrote: beautiful and so freakin sad, too. it shows excactly that miserable feeling usually related to last farewells. its a deep poem, very nice. beautiful way of weaving words together.
On Wednesday, January 9, 2013, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Wow.. your rhtym and rhyme are spot on.. i'm going to mail you in a few minutes so check your mail.. and thank you for reading me.
On Tuesday, January 8, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

DP - welcome and what is required to stay in some kind of membership? Ten meaty comments over the past month maybe? Wondering - cheers!
On Tuesday, January 8, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

wow this is outstanding. I am in tears thank you very much :)
On Wednesday, January 9, 2013, DePriest (15) wrote:

Thank you Poetess. It means very much to know others can truly identify with the emotions you try to create.