Pain In Your Eyes
By Killerdemonchick
I can see the pain in your eyes while I rip you apart.
I bathe in your blood while I feast on your heart.
You are one of my many victims
Filling my wine glasses to the brim
I lured you in on that cloudless night
You tried to run away, away in fright
But then you looked into my eyes
And I hypnotised you to quieten your cries
I coaxed you back to my lair
I ran my fingers through your hair
I grabbed your hair and pulled your head back
I broke your neck and felt your body go slack
You were not dead just paralysed
And that is how I could see the pain in your eyes.
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Copyright 2012 Killerdemonchick
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A former member wrote:
Manipulation is the greatest weapon of all, make people let their guard down, and then strike a blow that will cripple them. Outstanding work.
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On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Michael
(15) wrote:
Ruthless...I didn't expect the violence at the end. totally threw me off guard...in a good way though
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On Thursday, November 29, 2012, QuartzAl18
(21) wrote:
Outstanding!!!!!! That was grusome,cataclysmic, and horrific... you gave me the chills like watching a very scary movie. Thank you for the read.
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A former member wrote:
Dark and brutal, I like the tone and, assuming your not actually murdering someone, I take it be a metaphor for seduction and control, which I like... ;)