Pain In Your Eyes

I can see the pain in your eyes while I rip you apart.

I bathe in your blood while I feast on your heart.

You are one of my many victims

Filling my wine glasses to the brim

I lured you in on that cloudless night

You tried to run away, away in fright

But then you looked into my eyes

And I hypnotised you to quieten your cries

I coaxed you back to my lair

I ran my fingers through your hair

I grabbed your hair and pulled your head back

I broke your neck and felt your body go slack

You were not dead just paralysed

And that is how I could see the pain in your eyes.

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Published on Wednesday, November 28, 2012. Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Pain In Your Eyes"

A former member wrote: Manipulation is the greatest weapon of all, make people let their guard down, and then strike a blow that will cripple them. Outstanding work.
On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Michael (15) wrote:

Ruthless...I didn't expect the violence at the end. totally threw me off guard...in a good way though
On Thursday, November 29, 2012, QuartzAl18 (21) wrote:

Outstanding!!!!!! That was grusome,cataclysmic, and horrific... you gave me the chills like watching a very scary movie. Thank you for the read.
A former member wrote: Dark and brutal, I like the tone and, assuming your not actually murdering someone, I take it be a metaphor for seduction and control, which I like... ;)