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Stay Away
By Killerdemonchick
The excitement in my eyes,
The fear in yours.
My screams of joy,
Your screams of horror.
I grab your hand,
You wretch it away.
I drink the crimson red liquid,
You spit it out in disgust.
I run towards you,
You run away.
I leap onto your back,
You fall down to the ground.
I cover your mouth,
You try to
scream out.
I expose your neck,
Tears stream down your face.
I tell you to stop struggling,
You finally except your fate.
I open my mouth,
You whimper for the last time.
I bite down
on your vein,
You struggle again, but do not get free.
I drink
you dry,
You go limp and fall to the ground.
I stand up and wipe
your blood from my mouth,
You make no sound.
You should have
stayed away from the broken girl.
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Copyright 2012 Killerdemonchick
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On Thursday, January 2, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium
(275)
wrote:
Perfect beginning, middle, end... Love this.. Great write :)
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A former member wrote:
And so the hunter becomes the prey, priceless, and as it should be.
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, BrideToAgony
(13) wrote:
I love your last line. It was the perfect ending.
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A former member wrote:
Interesting layout here, I like the two apposing minds written in this way, brilliant yet again.... write on ~rose
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On Monday, November 12, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...cool. the frightening little scene is clearly projected...
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A former member wrote:
soooo good :) I love the vampire feel as well, well done amazing poem :D
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