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A Girl
By Korruption
I see myself walking towards what I want to achieve,
I look back and see...the ones I love. The ones I do not want to
leave and,
I cry. I weep, but I don't let them see.
This is my war. My path to fight. Not theirs.
Later,
I see myself in a mirror. The reflection is all wrong.
I see the image backwards, tangled hair, tired eyes, atrophic muscles.
She's weak, broken, and she can barely fight. Yet she does.
She fullfills her own path, even as slowly as she's going she tries.
Many don't believe in her. Many don't even try. They believe shes
too far gone.
That its a lost try, but she knows better. She will keep trying.
Even if she sees tears in her eyes.
This girl is hurt. This girl is lost, but most of all this girl fights.
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Copyright 2012 Korruption(MyKayla Hill)
Published on Friday, November 2, 2012.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
This is a work of art. U are my inspiration. So emotional. I could feel the sadness.
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On Friday, October 18, 2013, Korruption
(14)
wrote:
Thanks :) I guess i just wait till i hit a really passionate spot in my life
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On Monday, July 1, 2013, Bittersweetbedbyes
(15) wrote:
Very emotional. The last line was awesome. Diffenetly one of my favorite works now :)
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On Friday, October 18, 2013, Korruption
(14) wrote:
Awe thank you so much! :) That makes me really pleased to hear that people like my works.
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A former member wrote:
This is great. It's so sad, while still sending a positive message. Though it will be sad to see you go, I promise to keep in touch. I wish you luck and love on your journey, may it bring you back some day.
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Oh hell yeah. this girl fights. that is what i'm talking about. hello there baby. I didn't realize i was a favorite and had not even welcomed you. forgive me for that. I will now from this day forward be faithful to you. I am a lost soul and please believe that I fight ALL the fucking time even in my sleep. I would be glad to know you show you around inbox one another. hit me up let's say hello. I ain't going nowhere. much love.
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Korruption
(14) wrote:
Thank you and I love your work, I'm currently still schooling so I try to get on as much as possible but that's not always the case! Especially with all the extra classes!
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A former member wrote:
Keep going! Fighting against pain, and fighting for your future is the strongest thing anyone can do
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On Sunday, November 4, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...do we stay in a comfortable place & remain unfulfilled, or do we move on in search of a dream that may or may not exist? life is a crap shoot, but you sound determined. good luck...
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
You can do it K, and a strong positive message you do convey, thankyou for that and welcome to DP where you'll fit right in, cheers!
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Korruption
(14) wrote:
Thank you so much! It just seems hard to leave but I know that its what I want and I can't have both!
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