My downward Spiral

By VampireMandy

My downward spiral 

    Down
              Down
                        Down
                                  Down
                                            Down 
                                                      Down
                                           Down
                                Down
                      Down
           Down   
 Down
                     

I feel it going
I feel it going out of contral
I feel it tumbling 
I feel it fading,
fading fast
My downward spiral 

    Down
               Down
                         Down
                                   Down
                                             Down
                                                       Down
                                             Down                                              
                                  Down
                        Down
              Down
   Down

My end is so near
I can feel it breathing in my ear
O my
I feel it now!

My downward spiral

My end is here!



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Copyright 2012 VampireMandy
Published on Saturday, July 7, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

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  • Nehema On Saturday, July 7, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Need to change all the fell s to feel. Then it will be a fun read ;) - XXOO Scholar

  • VampireMandy On Saturday, July 7, 2012, VampireMandy (20)By person wrote:

    Thanks hun.


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